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Rest In Peace

Rest In Peace....

God saw you were getting tired,
And a cure was not to be.
So he put his arm around you,
And whispered "Come to me"

With tearful eyes we watched you,
And saw you pass away.
Although we loved you dearly,
We could not make you stay.

A golden heart stopped beating,
Hard working hands at rest.
God broke our hearts to prove us,
He only takes the Best!!

Author notes

One of my family members died so i thought i would write a poem about it!
Written March 31st, 2006

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  • lonewolvernsoul
    June 18, 2006
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    I LOVED it.

    I think Im ganna ... no it's something in my eye. This was different, in a good way. Hurt u lost, but nice that u knew wut was going on.


  • dominator
    April 11, 2006
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    brilliant

    i would say this poem is very good i lost someone close aswell so i can relate to your words in this poem


  • leander Moderators member
    April 7, 2006
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    This poem expresses a lot of sadness and grief because of the loss of someone that's very close to the heart... the flow of this poem is remarkably good, and also the rhyme is very well done
    thank you for sharing this one and welcome to the site!


  • holliebrown
    March 31, 2006
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    Beautiful

    Well I read your poem are you happy now you pain in ky butt! lol jk No it was really a good poem. Who died in your family? That is sad, death scares me a lot. WEll I got to GO. I will talk to you later I cant type bc you are distracting me you pain! Hahaha Have a good day and good poem by the way.