I thought I was meant to be with you.
But the time has finally come to bid adieu.
For I guess I was wrong, as I sit here tonight.
And pray for God to please, oh please, end this poor life.
I regret every decision since that heartbreaking day,
And look back on every choice with hate and dismay.
My fear and distrust has ended it all,
And it has come to the time for the inevitable fall.
As you said, all the I'm sorrys and I didnt mean its will not change a thing,
Even if I was to let you know I was ready to buy a ring.
As I stand ready to leave, I wish I could have had just one chance,
To ask you to share with me just one special dance.
Author notes
Written March 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Lets write a lovely!! poem for your EX bf/gf by Laura.
440 points, ended May 19, 2007, 92 entries
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This is a good poem but I think for this contest you could add more words like what she did wrong for it to end like that and if you want to add on or enter another poem ill surely accept it
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ohhh what a beautiful poem you ahve penned here very well written indeed good luck in the contest xxx
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Awww!!! I love this piece! It's very solemn, but it has such a sweet ending! Keep up the good work and I wish you greater poetry!
Ashlyn
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