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~In Your Arms~

In your arms is where I belong,

 and of this, I'm very sure.
In your arms, I feel a love

 that's innocent and pure.
When we lie together, our bodies

 wrapped up as if we're one,
Whispering and touching, until,

 through the window creeps the sun.
Another day I have you here,

 lying next to me,
I know there's no place on this earth

 that I would rather be,
You see, this is the safest place

 that I've ever been,
Here with you, lying in the arms

 of my very dearest friend.
This is where I'm happy,

 and where I feel I'm wanted,
I let go of all the painful things

 that have my heart so haunted,
I feel like I should pinch myself

 to make sure I'm not dreaming,
That you're really here beside me

 and the sun is really beaming,
I'm blessed to have you in my life

 and I'm mesmerized by your charms,
The most wonderful place I've ever been

 is right here in your arms.

Author notes

Being in love is the best feeling in the world.

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Written May 10th, 2004

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  • Glendolien Adanya
    April 18, 2007
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    i like this poem alot it is very descriptive and i wish you the very best of luck in this contest


  • Autumns Soul
    April 2, 2007
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    I like it...Thank you for entering and good luck


  • Yuki Now and Always
    March 11, 2007

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    I am so tempted to come up with a few notes for this....where's my guitar?! I REALY liked this one! I could feel the emotion and the real life feeling of having that undeniable protection is realy conveyed in this. I loved this one

    I feel like I should pinch myself

    to make sure I'm not dreaming,
    That you're really here beside me

    and the sun is really beaming,
    I'm blessed to have you in my life

    and I'm mesmerized by your charms,
    The most wonderful place I've ever been

    is right here in your arms.

    I liked how it gave me that happy dream like feeling all over again. Thanks for entering and good luck!


    • -Ink Artist-
      March 11, 2007
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      Thanks for the wonderful comment on this piece, LostChild! Much appreciated! This is written out of undying love for my man. I'm glad you enjoyed the read!


      ~Lori


  • -Ink Artist-
    May 26, 2006
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    Thanks for the sweet comment Helen!! This is written out of true love for my awesome, sexy bf!!

    ~*Lori*~

  • Helen Melon
    May 26, 2006
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    Hiya sister this is really nice makes me wanna go and cuddle up with my man, really nice piece of work. very warming.

  • Lady H
    April 24, 2006
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    I enjoyed this one! It was beautiful and touching. It made me feel happy!


  • angel-lover
    March 31, 2006
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    lovely

    oh I love this so warming,beautiful sweet write,oh lucky in love.

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