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Wait

In the darkness she lies
waiting for a sweet caress
that never came.

Is it the bosom, or is it the soul
that you want touched, I asked
and as she lay motionless,
I turned away.

On the bend that blinded my thoughts
and vision from her sensuous frame
in the darkness,
I planted a sweet soft kiss in the air,
that I knew would never reach her.





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Written March 31st, 2006

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  • lingonberries
    February 8, 2007
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    "I planted a sweet soft kiss in the air,
    that I knew would never reach her."
    interesting lines, that made me read the poem over again, I like when poems do that, make me wanna feel more of them! This is really good, and oh so sad. I can feel it!