I am We.
I am no longer one
I am an embodiment
Of everything we are
when we are together.
I do not need you
to make me whole.
I was whole before
I met you,
Even though
You complete me.
I am irresistible
because I radiate
wholeness and yet
you still add to me.
In this world of
hungry hearts
we are a rare delicacy,
and We are
Us.
Author notes
First contest I have ever entered, and I just whipped this one up- it was easy , because I am so in love with my husband!!!
Written March 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Falling In Love by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended April 3, 2006, 16 entries
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this is really very sweet. you have done a great job and it is nice to see that someone loves their other half as that is not always the case. viyanna r langager
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Aww this is really sweet and I enjoyed reading it. I think you did very well for your first contest poem. I liked the idea of completeness. Short but easy to grasp the meaning. Thanks for entering and good luck.
~Morbid[♥] -
oh, this is too light for my computer to read. I'm sure it's really good though.
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Wow! this is great. You have captured a beautiful relationship and the right reason for it....so well. I wish you the best of luck.
LIZ -
Too funny...my name is also Julie...
I am going through alot right now and am not feeling the love, lol
but this is a beautiful write.
I love that you make clear that you are whole on your own, but that together you are 'Us' ...very good and good for you!
I am happy for those that have that love ♥ -
Julie
Oh, I just love this, it shows how happy you are, and I am so happy for you because you truly deserve it
Love and Hugs
Karen
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