Watching from down on the ground
Soaring in the heaven’s above
A world that I would never know
A world of mystery, a world of awe
Oh how I wish I could fly up there
Flying, soaring above life itself
Dreaming, craving, deeply desiring
Wishing beyond all hope to be like him
Wooooooooooooooshhhhhhhh
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P
L
A
T
The desire to fly quickly leaving me
I would much rather live as a weasel
Than to be sucked into an aircraft’s engines
I think I’m starting to like who I am
Author notes
Option : 4
Quote that inspired this poem: "Eagles soar, but weasels never get sucked into jet engines"
I saw this quote in a contest and decided to write about it. I wrote it fairly quickly and a while back so it might not be my best. But hopefully it made you smile. 
No eagles were harmed in the designing process or the publishing process of this poem.
"Happy Birthday, you sexy Leo you"
Won gold in the following contest:
allpoetry.com/Contest/1872892
Written March 30th, 2006
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That's not bad. I love the "no eagles were harmed in the designing process or the publishing process of this poem" part on your author's comments.
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love the slight humour ot t but also has a gr8 idea to it about begginnig to like yourself!! overal a gr8 poem n 1 t obe proud of
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rofl...very funny!!
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Oops! I didn't see your comment from before. I mean, I saw it when you first wrote it, but I forgot when I entered it. 
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*LOL* Tim, I remember this one! I even see my other comment there! I'm glad you entered it. And I think you're the first to add that sexy Leo comment, too! Thanks hun!
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Congratulations on the gold. Not that its a rareity for you though.
Its not really that hard to make me laugh so dont get a big head or anything. lol.
(although i wouldnt blame you if you did. )
As said, i liked it very much.
rah
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Ah yes An oldy, but a goody! I hadn't read this poem probably since I had read it so I'm glad you brought me back to it. I got gold for this in the contest, by the way. I was quite suprised, but I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad I could make you laugh.
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hilarius
Hey. I'm sure this is a really old poem, but i was reading through your humerous ones, and although the others were really good...
THIS ONE WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD
You had me in tears!
Thanx for the laugh, i appreciate it.
Very Good,
Loved it.
' ...desire to fly quikly leaving me now...'
i just burst out laughing!
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mouahaha! thats a shirt at hottopic! i thoguth id seen that quote before....
even tho this was quickly done u cant really tell...it made me laugh, specially bout the part 'splat' ...lol
hmm...if i could fly, id fly above the plane line... then again i still hav to quire the ability to fly...*sighs* already i cant run, flyin's gonna b hard...
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Good job Tim. For a rush writing, I think you did an excellent job! You did quite well with the humour aspect and I especially enjoyed the disclaimer at the end! Good luck in the contest!
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that was really good Tim
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