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Twisted Fantasy

I've come this far
To realize you're just and illusion
That you were never really there
How could I be so thoughtless?
To think that someone like you cared
You made the world seem real
When I thought it was a dream
Too bad I couldn't tell the difference
Between you and reality
I am confused about what is around me
I thought you would never leave
But you were never there in the first place
Cause you were just a twisted fantasy.

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read it bitches...thankies
Written March 30th, 2006

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  • live-death
    May 7, 2006
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    ohhh i hate this... not the poem, just the feeling of realising that ur confusing reality with fantasy... i liked this very much
    by the way I LOVEEE EVANESCENCE


  • A Lonely Akumu
    March 31, 2006
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    Bitter Sweet

    Now that was Fantastic. Your very talented. I just wrote a poem similar to this one. It's a tad longer lol. Anywho I really liked this poem. And I can close my eyes and feel as if I could see what you see and feel what you have felt. Short but bitter sweet.