You lied to me and broke my heart
You made me believe that you were true
You looked into my eyes and convinced me
To fall deep in love with you
You gave me your word and smiled
Telling me that everything would be all right
I never knew what you were really up to
I didn't see any reason to doubt or fight
So I let you have your way
I gave into all that you are
At the time I thought you were so special
In my eyes you were a shining star
Then it finally happened one day
You turned out to be someone else
I went crazy when I first found out
It was a feeling I had never felt
I wanted to spend my life with you
I wish that you were honest with me
I also wish that I never met you
I should have never let you get a hold on me
It hurts to know that the one you love
Is someone you could never trust
It breaks my heart when I think about you
And how I loved you so very much
I'll never know what to do without you
Somehow I still feel you here with me
It's so difficult to move on
When you're still so much a part of me
I've known you my whole life
You were always my greatest friend
I wish that you were open and honest
So that our relationship wouldn't have to end
I still think about you all of the time
Even though it's been a year
I still sit and wonder where you are
As my eyes drip tear after tear
I hope that you will be able to find peace
And that your heart will grow to be true
I pray that honesty will get the best of you
And that you have learned your lesson too
Author notes
Written March 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- heartbreak by live in love.
500 points, ended November 8, 2007, 56 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Even if the love is gone, the heartbreak is always there... by WhenWillsCollide.
1063 points, ended November 9, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wanted: Make Me Think Of Him And Cry. by TangibleTattoos.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Heartbroken by Love-Lee.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 44 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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Just a wonderful write. Pulled me in from start to end, There is much feeling in these words. Easy to relate. GREAT write! :-)
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Wow...
That was very good! Remind me of a diferent ex... Lol! Great piece! -
it was radicule brilliant i love it
you are a essence hon and we kick some nice tush if you know what i mean its lovely you deserved this gold i fucken love you
jewels
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perfect. exactly what i wanted. i really love the flow, message, and everything about it. best of luck!
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omg....
this is EXACTLY what I am looking for...
this is EXACTLY how I feel... this is extremely scary becuase as I was reading this, I was thinking about how if matches my situation perfectly... even the events are in the same order!
this poem was great, partially becasue I could realte, and partially because it is very strong
thanks SOO much for your entry, as far as I am concerned, this is the winner right now -
this is so beautiful to be honest one of the best i've read so far in this contest it flows so beautifully and i'm impressed by your genious portrayal of this emotion. i adore this poem i truely do and i thank you so much for entering this contest and i would wish you the best of luck but i'm thinking you don't really need luck because this is wonderful
lil
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Beautiful
This is a superb write with a great flow. You have expressed your emotion extremely well. The longing for someone to be true and to love us is one we all share. If it doesn't happen that way, which is the case many times over, it can be heartbreaking. You have summed it up in a nut shell, fabtastic! I am some what puzzled tho'. You have asked people not to mention your name yet you have replied to their reviews, therefore revealing who you are. Best of luck in the contest! -
Beautiful
This is a superb write with a great flow. You have expressed your emotion extremely well. The longing for someone to be true and to love us is one we all share. If it doesn't happen that way, which is the case many times over, it can be heartbreaking. You have summed it up in a nut shell, fabtastic! I am some what puzzled tho'. You have asked people not to mention your name yet you have replied to their reviews, therefore revealing who you are. Best of luck in the contest! -
This was an amazing poem, thanks for submitting it for my contest
good luck and best wishes!
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Hello Girlofthesun! Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and comment on this. I am glad that you enjoyed it and no, you are not alone. I am sorry for whatever you have been through! I can feel your pain in your poem R.S.V.P.. It was a great write! I hope that everything works out for you in your future relationships. Take care and thanks again!
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A+++
Wow,this is such a great poem!!!
My fave lines:
It hurts to know that the one you love is someone you can never trust
I still think of you all the time even though it's been a year
It's so difficult to move on when you're still so much a part of me
I pray that honesty will get the best of you
...I felt like I relate 2 every single word.Your words help me 2 c that I'm not alone! -
WOOOOOOW ! THIS IS JUST AS WONDERFUL ! THANKS FOR YOUR WONDERFUL ENTRY !BEST WISHES IN THE CONTEST ! LOVE !
YOUR FAN,
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very sad
wow man I left my ex and the suitation was hard to leave him. I tryed for five years with my ex but he just lost interest. sometimes love fizzles out when both sides are not working on moving together in the realtionship.
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Jeannie, thank you for your kind words and comments on my work. It is greatly appreciated!
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Excellent
Wow! This is really awesome. You express the emotions so well. I felt the pain and agony in your words. You are very good at this. You have an incredible talent. I really enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for sharing, and please keep on writing. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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