HURT
All these thoughts of you rammed up into my soul.
Right now I feel like I'm going to explode.
Should I say it straight?
Or keep it inside and play it safe?
All these things I need to say,
but I won't; no way!
To let it all out
and hurt some one I care about...
Or Keep it in
and wallow in my own sins.
Others are going through worse
So why am I complaining?
In reality I should be celebrating!
To have someone close is something to smile at,
to know you'll still be beside me even if I get fat.
So I'll keep my thoughts inside.
Let them hide until the time is right.
I'd rather be hurt than to hurt.
Author notes
Um...yeah bad ending....sorry couldn't think of anything else....writers block.Advice is apreciated.
Written February 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- for the one you love by tSkye.
300 points, ended May 1, 2006, 31 entries
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i really liked it. keep up the good work.
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Hi Lolli pop punk, your popem is very good. It is very deep and dark. Keep on putting all your thoughts into poems! -
Tashaz right =D I enjoyed reading this actually. Take your time...just dont take too long hun.
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Tis not a bad ending at all..it's not like WOW but it's not a bad ending ...it all depends on how the reader reads it. ^^ hmm is this about what i think it is about? Lol i know it's about that. I like it haha this is far better than the others. Well the others werent my style so they didnt "tickle my pickle" much but this one does alot.^^ i aploud you.
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