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Crush in 3rd period MW

he sits down next to me in class
resistance! resistance!
his light brown hair has a glow
the focals resting on his ears and eyes
twinkle and make him cuter
dreaming, daydreaming
knock it off, its time to pay attention
but it almost seems inevitable
wanting to reach over to his hand
and feel the warmth of a hug
resistance! resistance!
he is taken, so hold back dude
a girl from another class has his heart
theres probably no chance for you
no relationship in the future, you two
but oh would a hug be nice

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Written March 30th, 2006

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  • antion
    March 30, 2006
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    LMAO!! thats awesum! I really do like this one!