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i got lost on the path of life today

don't know if i'm going the right way
i got lost on the path of life to day
listing to the things people say

no answers just questions it makes me low
when im their how will i know
are things meant to be just so

do you think i'll be alright
are my goles to far out of sight
no one listing shit thats right

what exactly em i supposed to see
what the world has in store for me
y dose every one just let me  be

will some one help me please
right now my dreams are just a tease
i'm asking for help begging on my nees

i got lost on the path of life to day
all thees questions getting in my way
you all know the answer but no one will say

ill just leave i cannot  stay
another day my patients will fray
so ill blaze a trail go my own way







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i got lost on the path of life to day ( that my them)
Written March 30th, 2006

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