Kaylie was very popular
dated alot of guys
head of the cheerleaders
she with held everyones eyes
But Kaylie held a secret
deep with in her soul
she bottled up her feelings
until it took her whole
Kaylie had two homes
very far apart
it saddened her fiercely
straight through her jagged heart
She didn't have memories
of her family being whole
she dreamed intensily
that she had only one home
She traveled between homes
with a smile that was forced
her parents never saw it coming
even after the divorce
Kaylie did well in school
she had a lot of friends
who thought everything was fine
up until the end
Her parents tore her apart
she with stood it best she could
but the argument between them
caused her secret to end
Her sorrow over took her
and down she sank
with her dream in her heart
and her face left blank
Her parents were lost
they couldn't understand
what exactly happened
to cause this tragic end
Her friends went in her room
looking through her stuff
and found a letter
that was never addressed
They were quiet suprised
as to what they found
they learned Kaylie's secret
which hurt in every ounce
Her friends told Kaylies parents
about the secret Kaylie kept
when her parents found out
they merely wept
Kaylie had been so desperate
to have a perfect family
Kaylie fell for a guy
and was going to have a baby
The letter was to her parents
saying she was pregnant
she was moving out
to start her own family
Everything was fine
everything was perfect
until Kaylie told the guy
she was two months pregnant
The guy was furious
he couldn't stand up straight
he beat the hell out of Kaylie
until she miscarried
With her dreams shattered again
her heart bruised and broken
Kaylie saw only on reason
to try and live again
Kaylie spent the day
with her brother one last time
for he was her only reason
she ever even tried
Author notes
yah this was an assignment for mr. jursik.... crazy huh....oh well...its sad...and very lil is based on me... im not sucidal... as far as i know
Written March 30th, 2006
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I hope this isn't a true story...oh dear. What an awful thing. And what a sad poem....it flows well and is easy to understand, good job. You deserve a good grade on the assignment.
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she did die, but the rest was afta her funeral and stuff and talkin about her last day
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Oh wow. I thought she killed herself at the end, but that was surprising. Is there an incestial relationship, or just a strong bond? It could be either from the sound of the poem. A very lovely add, darling. Keep it up. You spelled quite as quiet though. Might wanna fix that.
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SICNESS says:
good write your poetry is very deep with clear precise meaning that brings relivance to your words keep it up I look forward to seeing more works from you -
I remember writing things like this before, though I never use names. For some reason, I don't like to use names in my poetry. But anyway, you did a wonderful job with this, darling. It didn't really need the rhyme, but it didn't interrupt my reading of the poem. I'm sure you'll do fine in the assignment.
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