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You're Goin Down

Are you the executioner?
As well as the judge and the jury?
I don't care who you are
You're goin down

Who are you to have the right
To tell me what to do with my life
I don't care who you are
You're goin down

It goes like this
I am who I am
I do what I do
I like what I like
I go where I go
I don't care who you are
You're goin down

I don't deal with this
Hybrid dialect
Just tell me who the hell you want me to be
I'm sick of this charade
I ain't doin it like this

The pen is mightier than the sword
So here it is for you
I don't care who you are
You're goin down

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Written on 16th February 2003 @ 21:49 GMT

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  • JenP
    November 12, 2004
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    You show 'em! I love this, love the straight forward determined attitude. I hope whoever it is does go down.

  • enividaliehs
    June 28, 2004
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    ok...thats one too many times, sorry, this poem is disqualified for not following rules. Its a great write I have to say thou.

  • Forsaken Child
    February 16, 2003
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    ^_^ Well then, I guess we BOTH are honored and privilaged to read and comment on each others works. Have a good day!
    ~*Forsaken Child*~

  • Forsaken Child
    February 16, 2003
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    Way to Go!

    Another wonderful piece from your mind! Pretty, I love the repeation of "You're goin down" Thumbs up to ya on this one. ^_^ I'm honored to read such wonderful work, its an art! Great job!
    ~*Forsaken Child*~