A peace from everything how nothing matters any more all you see is and hear is the sound of beauty. Where there's no more harm, no more lies no more anything. You just want to smile all the time you see this light and you follow it not knowing where it leads but knowing that you've been hurt so much that all you want to do is find this place. So you walk day after day looking for a sign of anything to say that you are going the right way, but you see nothing yet your still not ready to give up you know there's got to be a place where you have a peace from everything. You know there's got to be a place to make all this pain you've been through worth while. SO you hold your head up high day after day and you keep going on but you see no signs so you begin to doubt yourself and that this is a real place. You want to go on forward yet you want to turn around and just forget about it all just to keep suffering. So what do you do? Do you go forward or do you turn around?
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ive been feeling like this for a while and im not sure what the answer is... i dont know what to do but heres another poem hope u like it!
Written March 30th, 2006
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.really like this been reading this for a few days now. (that sounds wierd doesn't it. oh well) been trying to figure out why. there's just something about it thats rings true inside me. want some words of advice from a total stranger? life is just a series of peaks and troughs. ride out the trough, the peak will come. just keep moving forward.
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Well, I don't really know?? I think that life always has ups and downs though. And somethings are just not worth missing no matter how bad the bad times are. Do you understand??? I hope so! Nicely written!
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You have to move forward Strawberrie!!! Always move forward and never look back. Remember no one can predict the future. If you go backward all you will do is ram your head against the wall! ALWAYS GO FORWARD! -
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Great write...you unfortunately have to FEEL this to write it..feels like waht I wrote this morning...take a look,,,
HANG in there... theres wisdom 4 the pain... -
It's good! YOU will make it!
As long as you are in the Light- you will eventually find your answers. It's a neat litle poetic verse-like story really. I liked it a lot. I think I have been on a giant Hamster treadmill sometimes...spinning, going nowhere.
Hang in there...don't give up!!!
All my Love;
-Father James.
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