ALIENS
Underneath the stars tonight
Are two children from a different world
Both trying to make a life on earth
As a regular boy and girl
Their looks are very monstrous
Their eyes see more than we will ever know
Their hearts are cold with no remorse
And every day their anger grows
Their goal on earth is to capture us
And successfully destroy the human race
So that they can reproduce and live on
Giving the earth a brand new face
Their evil minds are unpredictable
No one knows what he or she is capable of
Together these two young beings
Will replace us and destroy everything
That we have ever dreamed of
In their hands they hold unique powers
Always ready, willing, and able to fight
Using the rays of our sunlight they grow stronger
Causing every morning to return to night
With just a thought, they can set countries on fire
With the blink of an eye, they can dissect your soul
There is nothing you can do to stop them
Because our eradication is their goal
It’s just a matter of time now
Before they finalize their plan
One that they have kept secret from us
So that we may never know how or understand
Fear these two young lovers
They are not all that they seem
There is so much more to them
Than what they look like and far more in between
They are the children of the night
With no remorse or fear
They have no passion or emotion
Their only happiness is in our tears
So beware of where you are each day
Keep your loved ones close to your heart
Remember to make the best of every moment
For your tomorrow may never start
Author notes
Calm down! Don't worry! It's just a poem! lol
Written March 29th, 2006
Option #8
A contest entry
- It's Strange!! by meoncloud9.
600 points, ended May 21, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Para-normal, crypto zoology, aliens, anything far out....okay adding MAGICAL MYSTICAL THINGS...Just don't give me ORDINARY! by islekine.
600 points, ended September 9, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 10 options for the creative poet (2) by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended November 9, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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Nicely written, has great flow and imagery. I do like the way you set it up. Best of luck in this contest...Scott
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this is an awesome poem! much different from what i thought it would be! great write, thanks for entering!!
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Oooh. This is awesome!
Great job!
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okay, this was seriously disturbing, i've seen the movie... but i cannot member the name. i dont like the idea of aliens taking over and this disturbes me alot which i guess was the point of the poem so great write and i gots shivers...
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Lovely poem!! You've expressed things that don't exist, in a very imaginative manner. It's Strange indeed!!
This part of he poem is very inspiring!!!
'So beware of where you are each day
Keep your loved ones close to your heart
Remember to make the best of every moment
For your tomorrow may never start'
Very well written. And thanks a lot for abiding by the contest rules.
Best of luck in the contest.
- Wild
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I really enjoyed this poem-- I've never read anything like it. But, I regretfully say that I have to remove it from my contest due to the fact that it rhymes. Please make sure to read the rules thoroughly next time. Thank you.
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wow
good work man. I really like how you ended it. ^^ I always say it's the ending that makes a poem, you ended that well. Good luck in the contest man.
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Thank you Blue!
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Very spontaneous, very cool. I had a brief flashback to 'The Birds'.
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I must say I think it's very imaginative. You are inspiring and unique. I exspecially like thier only happiness is in our tears. Thanks for sharing your true talent.
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YIKES!! just when i was starting to not fear so much evil in the world i am warned about these two!!!
this is great. you really have a very vivid imagination allen. refreshing to see. viyanna
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this is kinda weird, like creepy in a way, but its a very well, in essentials, written poem, i like it!keep up the good work!
Don't Get Captured By Aliens(LOL),
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The ending is so so strong. The whole poem is brilliant, this is so original, well done.
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Rhyming is very forced, but a good concept.
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lol Let's hope we don't have to Julie! Thanks for your comments on this poem of mine. Take care and have a wonderful weekend!
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Get your TinFoil hat before reading !!
Okay I have my little hat made of TinFoil on my head I watched Signs.......Oh dear what am I going to do, does anyone know if I cover the house in Tinfoil will it keep them out? lol
I loved this you have a really good imagination xx
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