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Our Spirits Are One

Our Spirits have connected
since the first time I really
noticed you.

We have a bond that is
inseparable.

Even though we are not
together.

Our Spirits have become
one.

We live separate lives.

But....

Our Spirits remain inter-twined
together.

They fly high in the sky.
Looking upon us and wondering
why?

WHY, we can't see that they
have interlaced our souls
together.

Our Spirits are inseparable.

They have become one without
us telling them so.

No matter happens to us
our Spirits will always
be one.


Yvonne J. Griffin
2/16/03

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Written February 16th, 2003

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  • Jeff Waechter
    May 8, 2003
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    great job

    refreshing and hopeful - beautiful


  • Manicmuze
    February 18, 2003
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    sometimes we are blessed with kindred's... i believe it so, and i know exactly what you are saying here... i need to read you more often, for a boost of spirit and inspiration :-)

    Thank you for writing this,
    ~ Wendy


  • Rubee
    February 17, 2003
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    absolutely beautiful write Yvonne!!! Sometimes we just can't be with the one we love, but we don't let the distance keep our spirits from intertwining, sometimes it's not even up to us at all...I love the imagery of the two spirits meeting high in the sky, looking down in wonder as to the distance between the lovers...hopefully someday they will come together on earth as well... so beautifully written!!!

  • playboy5
    February 16, 2003
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    This really hits home for me and I appreciate your feelings on it. Isn't it strange that even though we feel the need to be with someone, we let things that can be overcome keep us from each other?
    john

  • -Dawn-
    February 16, 2003
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    Beautiful Yvonne just beautiful !

    What you captured here is that when we love another that person will always be apart of us regardless of what happens and I just love that idea

    Beautiful work

    ~~Dawn


  • Ashley Bright silver member
    February 16, 2003
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    beautiful in every way!
    well expressed!
    i much enjoyed

    ashes


  • Mary O gold member
    February 16, 2003
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    Our Spirits remain inter-twined
    together.

    They fly high in the sky.
    Looking upon us and wondering
    why?

    WHY, we can't see that they
    have interlaced our souls
    together.

    A funny reality but so true. I think this goes for all mankind, not sure if you ment it to this degree. I think too wer're all closer than we realize. My "Angel Whispers" story is a kind of testimony. Anyway, a thoughtful piece, I very much enjoyed.
    ~Mary O

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