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Void

Drawn back to the roots,
     a soul lost to me once
beckons yet again...

  How could I have forgotten,
    How could I have Ignored,
     How could I have denied...

reality -
     painful yet subtle 
         hits me ...
   a dream so wonderful,
      In your arms,
  the warmth I felt...
           all gone

If only I could pen down,
  what I felt
I know a tear would trickle
   down your face too...
A void envelopes my soul
  yet again...
    the closer I get to you.

'I love you' ...
   more now than ever before
my heart will never feel the same
                                    ever again...
alas... If only things were different...

Author notes

Yet again, 'A walk to remember' didn't fail to bring tears to my eyes. Had to write something...Photo credits- Found the photo somewhere on the internet.. sorry can't remember the website.
Written March 29th, 2006

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  • Pisces Pieces
    April 21, 2006
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    Strong write, beautifully sad, it makes me hope for you...


  • transcendental baby gold member
    March 30, 2006
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    I know ... but sometimes it is


  • Pisces Pond
    March 30, 2006
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    sometimes love just isn't enough.... sighs

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    March 30, 2006
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    If only. Why is it that some come back in our lives when we least and expect it (and often need it the most) to touch us and allow us to remember easier times. Bittersweet but beautifully written.

  • transcendental baby gold member
    March 29, 2006
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    Pi, I know it's none of my business, but it seems that if you love someone this much, you should see it through ... find out the meaning of something that strong coz it doesn't happen very often, if at all, to most folks. Some love has insurmountable difficulties, but if it's real, maybe it will find a way to indure ... to fill the void in a durable and loving way. I want to believe that anyway. I'm sorry, I'm terrible for giving advice that I wish I had even the opportunity to follow myself This is a beautifully written poem, by the way

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