Because you left an imprint,
Reconstructed my soul,
Exercised love within,
Where no man has ever entered,
Indigo filled with peace,
Nature took its course,
Gained a friend for life.
Searched for a life time,
Preserved and well taken care of,
In the presence of our Lord,
Regaining love and confidence,
In a place where spirits are lost,
Time will bring us back together again.
Yvonne J. Griffin
3/29/06
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Written March 29th, 2006
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I agree with what everyone has stated so far! This is a wondrous work of word-art and expresses a love that is unending. Though there appears to be distance, there is no separation. Excellent writ! Makes me sigh!
Much Love,
Renee
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My this is extrordinary.
The words and flow are phenomonal.
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
You cannot begin to understand what this poem means to me.
Thank you so much for allowing me to read it.
Great, great, great write.
Absolutely flawless.
~Carla -
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beautifully done really enjoyed this very much the opening three lines opened it to spiritual enrichment throught out the poem Because you left an imprint,
Reconstructed my soul,
Exercised love within,
blended with the the closing lines
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The last line- have they passed on? Sorry if I'm wrong and it seems an innappropiate thing to say, that's how I interpreted it
I liked the spiritual side of this, good use of imagery Keep writing this was a good poem of friendship
Thanks for your comment
All the best
Pozo
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this seemed really peaceful and kind of happy, I guess is the word I'm looking for. Really sweet, I liked it a lot. The only other thing I can say is that I couldn't exactly tell what it was about, I'm guessing it's about someone you love, am I right? I didn't mean that as an insult, just a mention. It was really good though, keep it up.
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