Timothy,
Staring into your pools of blue
I place this ring upon your finger
My whole heart and soul now yours
For now and always, infinity squared
Timothy, life has graced me with your presence
You are the only man I was ever meant for
My whole being exists solely on the knowledge
That I love you and want to be with you
God has truly blessed me beyond all blessings
By giving me a wonderful man like you
To call a husband, my partner, my everything
Never will a day pass that I won’t cherish you
The future is so offering with you by my side
My love, we will conquer anything
Together united, one in mind, heart, and spirit
Forever I will need you, forever I will love you
Sarah,
You came into my life unexpectedly
By random chance we bumped into each other
As time went on, I knew we had something special
I knew you had a special purpose in my life
My love’s fire continues to blaze
Burning forever brighter only for you
Every time I think I love you with all my heart
I find myself falling father and father into love
Every morning I rise and you are on my mind
Every night I sleep and only dream of you
You complete me and restore my soul
In you I find comfort and the perfect peace
As I place this ring upon your finger
I give to you my life, my heart, my all
For you are my all, my everything
The woman I will spend the rest of my life with
Author notes
This poem was written in collaboration between Sarah (Immense Love) and myself. We have now broken up, but this is still a great poem so I decided to leave it up here.
Written March 29th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Master Of Ceremonies; Wedding Bells by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended April 5, 2006, 1 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wedding Vows by Asylaarix.
300 points, ended November 24, 2006, 2 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol you grabbed my heart with the precious moments picture ... i am a collector of precious moments ... lol ... wonderful choice ... now for the write ... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ... my god ... this is gorgeous ... my fiance was touched ... and it was wonderful to see his gaze as he read this ... and telling me that this touched his heart ... absoultely stunning ... good job sweety
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Thank you very much for your comment
Half of this was written by my girlfriend so I'll pass your message along to her. God bless you too 
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This is beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes, the best words are the ones that touch you deep inside, as this did.
Your are very talented. God Bless!! -
Thank you so much, Shannon I really appreciate your comment and applaud. I enjoyed doing this collaboration as I did enjoy writing that piece with you.
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aaawwwww. this is really beautiful. i'm so glad that you two have found each other. this is just wow. i love it.
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Eye catching
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Beautiful words from you both. I truly enjoy the fact that in real life you two are together and have plans on getting married. I want to thank both of you for taking this plunge and participate in the Contest Master Of Cermonies; Wedding Bells. I wish you luck in the contest and becoming AP husband and wife.
Ted E
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This is just beautiful, a truly magical blending of pens and love, continued blessings to you both, and may you be happy forever Josephine
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amazing
Wow, this was truly beautiful! It almost made me cry. I just hope I can write like this for my vows.......you can just tell somehow it's from the heart. I loved it! You have a really awesome homepage, too, by the way.
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OH MY GOSH!!!! This is SO beautiful! Thanks for telling me it was on here, Tim! I love this so much... This is such a wonderful poem, to both of you. Best of luck in the contest!!!
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Wow!awesome u guys!
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This is so precious! You have both done a wonderful job expressing your love and feelings for one another. Great job! Shancy.
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p.s, I love the background and picture, it compliments the poem so well.
ya, I forgot to add that
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wow, this is good on both ends Sarah, these are beautiful vows that you were able to write, and Tim, your able to put the complicated emotion of love into words, is amazing. Well, obviously you two are deeply in love
and I wish you both the best of luck in the contest as well as in ya'lls relationship.
's to you both
~*Chelsea*~
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