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I Love You More

2 hearts living a different way
2 hearts come together in a single day
loving, being, and acting as one
never a better pair under the sun
spending time together in total happiness
then 1 day things go to a total mess
cant talk without having a fight
cant be together without a light
in the begining, you left my heart smokin
now youve just left it tattered and broken
i want so badly just to hold you, baby
is there still a chance for us, maybe?
i know you have her & its me you dont miss
but if i had one last chance, one last kiss
maybe then i could make you see
that i love you more than any other "she"

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Written March 28th, 2006

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  • Leper Messiah
    March 4, 2007
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    hey.....

    this si about me isnt it? i love you hun im so sorry for when this happened


  • LOVExKILLSxME
    December 8, 2006

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    AMAZING!

    tegan i soo didnt know you wrote oh my this is wonderful cuz i know how your feeling or you did whatever the case may be great poem i love it
    <3 Christina
    xoxo