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love you forever

at times i cry without your face
it make me sad to a complete disgrace
i try to see you but it never works
the more i try the more it hurts
i hate to be left alone without you
bcuz you help me see right throu
right throu the good and bad
and the happy and sad
ive never thort like this before
but now i know it all for sure
you are the one who makes me smile
will you stay just for a while
make me feel loved and cared for
even though you love me more
i will always show my love for you
cause this time i know its true
you seem to spark my life with fun
but when im without you i cannot run
i cannot hide i cannot see
and its cause you found me
i cant believe ive fallen for you
its the best feeling cuz i know its true
i will always love you babe
and stay with you forever

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Written March 29th, 2006

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  • Balthazar
    April 30, 2007

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    Very romantic and lovely. Love covers. excellent poem it is really in your heart and so glad on your behalf. Excellent work.

    Balthazar