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to you

to life i give a second of moments
to you i gave my heart and soul
my first moment in love with you
will soon be a story untold
a loving part of life itself
a boy and girl meet unplanned
into a glance of heartfelt love
there and then they both stand
he falls for her looks and style
she fell for the heart he gave
never knowing it would all fall apart
she turned into sumone misbehaved
falling for every word he said
she thort shed found the one
i just wanted to believe in you
and sit to watch the sun
but all i got in return
was a broken heart
now that youve gone
im glad that we're apart
never missing the way we were
ive found a love thats deep and true
he reminds me that i am brilliant
and that i should be glad i lost you

Author notes

the past should stay behind you! look into whats best for you and the ones around you.
Written March 29th, 2006

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  • orrisking
    June 21, 2006
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    your poetry are young and tender i love it i love u because your words are living when i am reading.Great work with future assured

  • rebel-cowboy
    March 29, 2006
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    good

    this poem is very good and flows nicly with passion


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    March 29, 2006
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    I really liked this because it was full of emotion and passion. It was really good to read and I liked it a lot. I would like to read more of your work soon.