I love her and she loves me
Why won't they just let us be?
It matters not, our reproductive parts
All that truly matters is what is in our hearts
Get a clue and take a hint
Care about your words, we didn't!
Some say it's wrong, they say the bible shows
It's all interpretation, so who really knows?
So I'll just go and take my screw you attitude
Some even say "That's hot dude!"
Author notes
Lol, not one of my better pieces I think. But it gets my point across! 
Written March 28th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Its called Rainbow Pride by Ice Phoenix 8.
300 points, ended March 28, 2006, 5 entries
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Lol! Way to go with this. Standing up for what you believe in. I recently wrote a piece like that, it's called "Mimes Backstage" It's along the same lines.
Love always,
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I liked it. It made me laugh, the rhyming was done well, and I appreciated it. I thought it could have been longer, but that's just a personal opinion.
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love it. seriously, ive never seen a poem like this and i like it alot. good job!
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oh babe! it is so beautiful. i love the rhythym and point of this piece. i hope ur relationship with jessica is going greatly, so you i fully suppport it and since i love you so much, i hope it all works out! is kayla still not okay with it, or are you guys o again? anyone who gives you and shit about it i will fucking kick their ass. well, back to what i thought about the poem. your descriptive words were excellent, and i truly loved them. your views, especially about the reproductice parts are very true and parts of this are humorous. i love it, period. call me later hun! gay pride!
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Hmm I like your poem, it is funny, a felt it ended a little too quickly lol but that's just me being greedy. I agree with LadyMidnight, it is very cute, and yet it screams of pride so it doesnt lose it's point. Well done, it's a great poem. And good luck in the contest
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i hate to use the word *cute* but your poem was very cute,and kinda funny. very kick ass
you definitly got your point across,and i think you asked some good questions.
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wow..that is a funny ass poem. LOL..it made me giggle and laugh. I t is true and states what people do think..although there are alot of people that think lesbians are hot...so ...why dont they think gay people are hot??..lol
dumb question
GREAT write.
good luck.
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