This Time
Time passing quickly,
the teenage years have gone,
Tomorrow I'll start my diet,
know the lyrics like a song.
I have no more excuses,
"the child bearing hips"
I know its time I ought to
forget the cheese with chips.
Feeling so positive,
I rushed to join a class,
Guaranteed ten pounds yes,
but oh, it is your cash.
a whole new list to read from,
before eating tea,
my new look, my slimming,
it all hinges on me.
The pounds are shedding slowly,
my bum is not so big,
you have to change your daily life,
in all you do and think.
I will always be a "slimmer"
thin is not my game,
time passing quickly,
I know I'll reach my aim.
Author notes
Written March 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- THE SPONSORED SLIM by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Excellent composition---Very well written & versed!--
Best of luck in the contest!
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This is such a positive write! I think that alot of people can relate to this one. I hope that it is going well!
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Excellent
Superb writing,well you know i love reading all your poems and this was just another cracker.Keep up the good work.Kenny -
i like my "child-bearin'" hips.
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