I can offer only the tears,
Caused by your departure,
To make you smile,
To think i'm sweet,
And love me in the moment.
I can only present you a smile,
When you're near,
When I hear your voice,
Though all i want to do is cry,
For the little time running through my fingers,
As sand through clouds of dust.
I'd give you the world if i could,
Everything i ever was,
If I thought you would take it,
I'd die for you,
But i'm living for you,
And it makes no sense that tears and smiles can bleed.
I'm just me,
Just a little girl,
But i've been touched by an angel,
Now I have to come to face reality,
I can't keep the angel in a glass jar,
When all i want to do is make her feel special.
I would brave a thousand storms,
Shoot a thousand rainbows,
And give up every dream for you,
Because you gave me the dreams,
Accidentally,
Giving too much of you.
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Written March 28th, 2006
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Very lovely. Thank you so much for sharing your favorite with me, best of luck in the contest.
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whisper
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i really feel the love when i read this- the love you have for this "person". I know how it is to love someone that much and in that way Its like i was reading my emotions i feel for my lover. Well good poem It was written so beautifully and honest.
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Sentiments so well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand. Think that the i's need to be either capital or small, not both, as with the i'm and I'ves.
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Intense, powerful piece. Well written, well presented. debby
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Oh hun I haven't got the foggest who this is for but it is really beautiful and would make the hardest of hearts melt !!
This was really a pleasure to read my friend and so beautifully written !!
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This is indeed a lovely poem. The sentiments that you express ar heartwarming. Your poem flows with the love that it was written with. Very nicely done indeed!
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Wow. This is an intense little poem. I guess you were feeling really passionate when you wrote it and it shows.
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beautiful, touching & amazing
ok, well i know who this is for and the sentiment is so touching, nothing to be embarassed about. it's really beautiful. i think the last stanza is my favourite it is just beautiful to me. i also like the angel in the penultimate (sp?) stanza it really shows how important they are to you and how much they mean. it's an amazing poem and you've expressed your feelings really well - luv me x x x
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