Early morning strolls across the grassy field
Sweetness in the air, natures beauty so real
I sat there watching the clouds in the blue sky
Resting on a log, I saw the eagles flying by
Observing the tiny ants crawling on the ground
With tiny crumbs of food, that they have found
Sun shining warm and bright, but the night before
He stood quite in the moonlight, in my front door
We walked along the beach bare foot in the sand
Sharing our thoughts about our wonderful plan
Later on the boardwalk we sat down for a rest
That's when we embraced, my lips began to confess
My need for your touch, contained for much to long
Kisses you gave so sweet how could they be wrong?
Really to enjoy the moment, we decided to slip away
Then another part of nature, on stage began to play
Before we knew it, the sun was about to come out
Sweet mesmerizing morning, we heard seagull pout
Walking hand and hand, along the sand shore
Reminiscing last night, we both wanted more!
Author notes
One beautiful night of love shared between two people in love.
Written March 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- Take me to a beautiful place by Yellow-Rose.
600 points, ended May 15, 2008, 35 entries
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A beautiful and well written poem. Well done and thanks for your entry
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sweet and touching. its lovely. good luck in my contest!!
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beautiful!
Sweet sensual vivid images that we all need more of loved it.. -
sweet
"Then another part of nature, on stage began to play" Oh! Nature aquired from the nature at the sea is played so beautifully on the 'stage' of the sea shore in the early twilight. I am thrilled about the episode dear sweet Ennovy! Thank you dear! -
wow this is amazing, love is amazing.
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Very sweet and the imagery was beautiful. Thank you for this nice addition to my contest! I really enjoyed this piece.
Good luck in the contest as well as in Love.
Take care,
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There's nothing like a summer love and it's wonderful to remember it, too. It's good to combine nature with love..as you did here. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem!
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We found this to be truly "sweetly sensual" Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece; we very much enjoyed it!
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Beautiful Write!! Very descriptive!
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Very visual write -some vivid images of the location, feelings and actions shared with us in these lines. Sentiments expressed very well - easy to read and understand.
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