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A Day To Remember

Knock,knock,knock,open the door a present waits for you
It's filled full brim with sunshine and skies of powder blue
Sandcastles ,crabs and seagulls are waiting to join in
A sailor stands there waiting, he hopes your heart to win

He'll take you on a carousel, the horses whizzing round
You'll both feel really dizzy as you step on the ground
Some candy floss to nibble an extra special treat
And hot dogs and hamburgers with onions fresh to eat

Returning to the beach you will swim and surf all day
Laughter for a lifetime as you enjoy your play
As as the daylight lowers and birds take evening flight
You'll sigh the sigh of lovers and whisper soft goodnight

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Written March 28th, 2006

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  • meena krish
    March 30, 2006
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    A romantic and enjoyable day to experience and also one to remember..beautifully penned.
    Thank you for your entry..and good luck.
    Take care~


  • Gwenevere
    March 28, 2006
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    Thankyou, yes it's a reminder of summer and fun in the sun.How I long for summer to arrive.I hear it creeping ever nearer.Thankyou for your lovely comments, Ros