AS THE PIECES OF MY BROKEN HEART PASS THROUGH THE NEEDLE'S EYE,
BEFORE ME LIES AN OCEAN,AS THERE ARE NO TEARS LEFT TO CRY;
MY MIND REMAINS SUBMERGED, OBSCURED, OBLIVIOUS TO MY PAIN,
AS I REMINISCE IN COUNTLESS TIMES-WHEN I HAD LOVED IN VAIN
CONFUSED AND DISJOINTED,I LIE AT NIGHTS
HELPLESSLY...MY THOUGHTS TAKE FLIGHT,
BACK TO WHEN I KNEW YOUR KISS-
AND LONELINESS DID NOT EXIST
NO MORE MAY I SEEK COMFORT IN THE WARMTH OF YOUR EMBRACE,
REMEMBERING,NO! HAUNTED, BY VISIONS OF YOUR FACE;
LIKE SIAMESE TWINS, OUR SOULS WERE FUSED, IRREVERSIBLY FROM THE START,
THE REASON FOR MY TORTURE...IT SEEMS WE'RE WORLDS APART
LONGING TO COME RUNNING BACK-IN YOU I COULD CONFIDE,
MY ONLY INHIBITION IS A LOOMING WALL OF PRIDE;
WHICH OFTEN IN FUTILITY,I'VE TRIED TO OVERCOME
NOW FACED WITH LOSING EVERYTHING, SOMEHOW IT MUST BE DONE
IN EXCHANGE FOR HAPPINESS, THE WORLD IS WHAT I'D TRADE!
SACRIFICING ALL-I SIEZE THE DOUBLE-EDGED BLADE;
MOMENTARILY, I BECOME ENSNARED IN THE BARBED WIRES OF REALITY
RELIEVING ME OF MY GARMENTS AND DISTORTING MY SANITY...I AM NAKED!!!
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simply profound, keep it up!
I can really relate but to hear it so expressed, with such artistic eloquence, so figurative yet graphic!~ Keep on doing what ur doing, maybe some day I'll be reading ur own anthology, like a Romeo-Tupac. -
AWSOME!
I can;t say much more but I loved it! so descriptive and moving great write keep it up!
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