Stillness. Refreshing peace.
Pure. Bright. Enthralling.
Streets of gold. Living in
Perfect harmony. Awestruck.
Everything surrounded in
Beauty. Love and serenity
Fills every soul. No pain.
No hatred. No sin. Such a
Wonderful feeling.
Presence of God. Joyfulness.
Beautiful songs of praise. Eternity
In paradise. Eternity in this perfection.
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Picture ©2006 to Sharcu.
I designed the picture using Bryce 5 for the initial picture and then Photoshop CS for fix-ups. The poem is written in the style that I've started writing in recently - incomplete, short sentences. This poem can come no where close to what heaven will truly be like, but I hope you enjoyed reading it. 
Written March 27th, 2006
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Hey look, no-ones commented on this in two years
Wow, even back then you were making awesome backgrounds and images. I'm still totally jealous ^^
Lovely poem too, I don't usually see you're poems around :-\
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Claire x
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Bravo designer cheers to u.
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uplifting. great poem
I would applaud, but I have none left. I realy live this poem. It's hard to sum up heaven. I know, I've tried. I'm a fellow brother in Christ Jesus. So, it's great to see another beleiver on here. I also long for that day when I get there. This is what I needed -
Why thank you so much! I am absolutely flattered by your wonderful comment you have left me! I am sitting here grinning and also blushing
Thank you for the applaud and the encouragement. If you had some poems I might be able to return the favor. 
If you ever want to talk, feel free to send me a message 
--Tim -
ok, my comment before this got me more points. so here's your applause that i was waiting to give!
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Wow, that's a beautiful pic! and the poem is excellent! I've spend my last 1 and half hours looking at your work. You're creations are just beautiful!!! and i like how u have a quote for some of them. anyway, keep up ur great work! i'll look at more later. i havn't commented on any of the ones that i looked at but they were just EXCELLENT!! You've got a great talent! The pic that was so serene.. blue calm river.. it was just so magnificent! anyway, everything you've done that i've seen so far is great!!
ps hey i don't have enough points to even applaud any of your work, so sorry.!
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They way you describe Heaven is neat...in our tiny little minds, this is what we have to go on. Won't it be AWESOME to finally get to Heaven and find that it was WAY more than we ever imagined!!! I can't wait to bask in His full glory!!
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wow, dude i couldve gotten the first comment...but noOo! lol
actually, the sight of the pic u used....made me flash back. anyways, (can i here u say "ya..." )
mhm! serenity! yes!!! u've nailed it mate...i luv how that stanza (ending with serenity) connects with the next because of the way u cut the sentences...
sweet man!
i do wonder....what a soul looks like... *dreams*, but thats off the subject...
mMm, our home...and we don't even hav the capacity to imagine the beauty... perfection. how can our corrupt minds even use that word, if we hav never seen it...tho a taste mayb...mhm...
food for thought, the way i like it
mushy -
It's very beautiful thinking of the words and then using my imagination.. usually I don't like this kind of style (although it still is great), but with this one, I was able to think. When you said certain words I thought of certain things. Because it's heaven, no one can argue that what we think will be there isn't there until we all find out. Well with the exception of Satan and bad things, we know he isn't there.
Anyways. I really loved this, left my mind to think of what I wanted to and see my own perception.
Example of what I mean:
Refreshing peace
.. it's embarrassing that I write it now but I thought of the water fall I went in in Puerto Rico.. it was beyond refreshing and then the peace you had, knowing you were in something so amazing that God made and few saw and appreciated..
I'll stop, I guess that was a little corny, my connection eh? *laughs nervously*
*God Bless*
Sarah -
Hey well once again you used this style. It is ok but i don't really like it
Oh well it is your writing not mine. Good poem anyway. I like how you made the picture and the poem match. (as always) WEll good luck in this contest!!!!
*kimberly*
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this was a very nice poem about what heaven will be like. Taht is sort of how I imagine it as well. This was a wonderful write with a stunning picture. Thank you for enetring my conetst
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