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Scientific Conclusion

I have a faith I depend upon,
with the Lord and science I am drawn.
The composition of life on earth,
depends upon a mixture from birth.

However I tend to think for myself,
given informed opinions in health.
Uninformed is lost in the dark,
scientist conduct experimental arts.

Still I remain steadfast of the Lords word,
knowing his superior intellect concurs.
Taking scientific conclusions in balance,
with his directive laws without malice.

Everything can be described by science,
with the exception of faith unbiased.
If I in thinking object to informed views,
see science too full of it's ego misused.

I balance the outcome with my faith in him,
knowing his wisdom is the means to an end.
Science is his,he allows us to learn,
if we overstep him, we're sure to get burned.

He's given free will for us to decide,
balance we must to save our own hides.

             ~~~Suseann~~~

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Not sure if this was what you were looking for in laymans terms,but this is my thoughts on the subject.This won gold in Titus's contest of science.
Written March 27th, 2006

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  • neverontime
    March 28, 2006
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    Nice write, suseann. Yes, very nicely done. This is a wonderful inspirational write here, and I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in this contest! Susan

  • petty foibles
    March 27, 2006
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    this makes some very interesting points i am sure could lead up into long debates. its good that your so strong in your faith. i am to but my faith is on a different path and it is my belief that the Goddess has a hand in things too. as those of my religion would say... all paths lead to one. i think that is to say that your path to God is the same as mine we just stand on different sides of the same coin. nice write and thank you for making me think about some things. good luck


  • Tercil gold member
    March 27, 2006
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    Now, Poetry likes this puts a human form within the natural bias of things. You don't know how many little clues you have written here, I make up the person who writes like this as free willed. Much in this gives me the impression that you are a fair and understanding person, one who doesn't gossip much, but when needed, it will be very methodical. Fearful of the world today and waiting for answers has it that you are very patient as well. Good Luck, as I said, I won't get many submissions so this one is a good start. Very good luck, Titus