What am I?
I am young
I am old.
I am found
I am lost.
I am happy
I am sad
I am love
I am hate.
I am thunder
I am lighting
I am fire
I am water.
I am a idea
I am a crime
I am the truth
I am the lie.
I am night
I am day.
I am something that
will never go
away.
I am the wind
in your hair
I am the earth
beneath your feet.
I am you
I am her
I am he.
I am always changing
I am always me.
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Written March 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- who am I ? by maa.
333 points, ended June 15, 2006, 12 entries
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just a teeny-tiny suggestion concerning typing errors : it should be "an idea" and "lightning" ... no big deal really, but I thought I should mention it.
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dear innocence,
you know what, I really like your poem !
thank you for proposing it in the contest.
I enjoyed the simple words, and the flow of the poem, similar to a pendulum's movement between opposites. isn't it like our daily life, when we continuously try to find balance between contrary forces ?
your poem strikes through its simplicity, you can't get more essential about things. this is great. you reveal to us in a very unique way how there is nothing in the universe that you are not. when one looks deeper, he will discover a very profound universal truth in your words.
a very beautiful poem indeed.
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really like the choice of words and how you know who you are well done
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lol ^_^ very interesting to say the least XD
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nice...very very nice, you know the best thing about this write is that you will find that it appeals to alot of people because on some level they have felt the same, atleast i know i have but havent been able to say it or put it down on paper you have done that. so great write keep up the great work bye and take care of yourself
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Great
Wow i like the concept -
I really like this, it flows really well, Keep it up!
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