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The night I'll never forget

I was up til 5:30 the morning before trying to clean the house for when everybody got there, so it would be nice and clean.
I finally went to bed then got up two hours later, to finish what I began.

I worked all day and when I was done, I had to start to get ready, my night you see had just begun!

I took a bath, and washed my hair, got out put on my glasses, and then you were there.
I went to go get my nails and hair fixed all nice and pretty,
and was so rushed when I hit highway 20.

I rushed to get home, and to do my make-up, I almost ripped my dress trying to get it on.

(The only thing that wasn't perfect about my night was you came in while I was trying to get dressed and ruined my grand entrance!- but that's ok, you made up for it!)

I walked down the stairs all nice and slow, and everybody gasp as they said I glowed.

We took our pictures, and hugged momma good-bye, and we climbed into the limo, and we were off.

We had so much fun in our hummer limo all the way there, the five of us!

When we finally got there, everyone stopped and stared, we looked so elegant, like we were millionaires.

We danced all night, we laughted and we had fun, and then when our time was done...

We rode away in our black limozine, and we luaghted and talked about the wonderful night we had.

When we got home, we said our good-byes, and we changed our closes and me and you headed out for the time of our lives.

We went out and headed to the restuarnt and much to our suprise you got pulled over. (lol) I couldn't belive it.. We were so scared, but then when it was over we laughed so hard!!

When we got to the restuarnt, we ate something sweet, and we laughed and we teased about old memories...

Then we headed out again to go see a movie, but the movies were closed so we became home-bound!

Once back at our house, we got undressed and went to bed, and you kissed me sweetly on the top of my head. You told me you loved me and couldn't wait for more nights like this, so layed there in the bed and we kissed and we kissed and we kissed!

I love you, I love you, I love you I do, and our hopes of spending every night like this will come true!


Baby.. I can't wait to spend forever with you!

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To the love of my life thank you for the night of my life, one i know I'll never forget!
Written March 27th, 2006

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  • April 30, 2006
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    aww this is so sweet its a good write and it explains that you love that person deeply congratulations to the person you love! keep up the good work
    ~Sasha

  • southern kisses
    March 28, 2006
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    Yeah you will. When you two are 50 and he is giving you a sponge bath through out all of your wrinkles. Just kiddin. My night was fabulous.