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Don't count on me-Pixiku

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'They say money grows on trees
I’ve got news for them!
I'm the one who makes the money.'

Author notes

Note:  Often within the freedom of a Pixiku, with thought not confined  by a syllable count,  the natural flow of thought flows into a Senryu or Haiku 17 syllables or less criteria.  Pixiku is all encompassing three line quote-like expression of that thought where you think, "WOW!   That's a fantastic thought.  I think I'll write it down and claim it."  The three lines allows opportunity for placing stress on main points of thought to best express message therein.  Since a Pixiku is all encompassing all u's are welcome here.  Unlike a Haiku or Senryu, you CAN capitalize first letter in each line in a Pixiku and a Pixiku can be OVER 17 syllables without a syllable limit of 5, 7, 5 for each line.

Written March 27th, 2006

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  • jenelda silver member
    March 29, 2006
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    Hey Abdul, it's Jen, not Joan, she is angelica!
    Joan told me you'd been talking to her on yahoo earlier.
    jen
    Edited on Mar 30, 3:39 p.m. because ''.

  • abdulrahman
    March 29, 2006
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    great

    nice work joan keep it up

  • abdulrahman
    March 29, 2006
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    whta self reproaching work is tgisa i really lke what u have discribe in here, yes i the cow,no me though he is the one making the money.
    i like the work which u have done in here nice


  • Vickie J
    March 28, 2006
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    I keep checkin gthe nurseries to see if I can git me one of them there money trees, but ain't been able to find me one.
    This was adorable-nothing like a good laugh in the middle of the afternoon vj


  • Roseleaf
    March 27, 2006
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    cleverly done pixiku

    lol this one is very clever you surely are getting good at this special Pixiku it surley tells the story so very well

    ~~Pauline


  • jenelda silver member
    March 27, 2006
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    Thank you Alice, Yeah the money trees been plucked dry! So now you have to milk the cow!

    Jen


  • jenelda silver member
    March 27, 2006
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    Thanks Sam.

    Jen


  • SEA angel gold member
    March 27, 2006
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    Cute

    Moooooo I like your Pixiku. If you don't find money on the nearest tree please don't milk money out of me either. I'm too busy looking for money on trees so won't stand still long enough.
    Edited on Mar 27, 12:27 because ''.


  • Samplette gold member
    March 27, 2006
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    lol...too good!! I love it!!! A great pixiku for sure. Humorous treasure. Very best to you in the contest.
    Sam

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