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The Inner Journey

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I embark on a journey,
    my inner journey...
The one to find myself...

Who am I?
Why am I?
What did I do
    to deserve what happened?

When life passes us by,
    we must become part of it,
          else, we loose part of ourselves,
              we allow things to happen,
                    beyond our control.

Find our soul,
    for it knows
          truly who we are,
              what we are all about,
                    what makes us “tick”...
What we do to find it,
    is look deep inside ourselves...

It takes time,
    to search our soul.
          and to find what we are all about...
We must love ourselves,
    first, before we can love,
          truly love, another...

Circumstances change,
    in our lives...
Truth sometimes becomes muddled
    for a while.
What really matters?
The journey,
    for self discovery...

For within the journey,
    we decide...
Within the quest,
    we find what we have missed,
          ourselves...


© Jonathan Wikkins November 29, 2001
Revised March 5, 2008
All Rights Reserved

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Written November 29th, 2001

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  • Swan song gold member
    March 22, 2008
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    Excellent poem and very thought provoking One of those poems one needs tor read several times


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 4, 2003
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    Awesome piece. I totally relate. Finding ourselves is most important in life. And keeping true to ourselves. Its the most important thing. We can share ourselves, but we need to be who we are as well. Excellent write!!


  • Rose Patrick
    May 27, 2003
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    at one time or another we all have to take a enter journey. that how we know who we are . great write thank you for shareing it

  • Wilted Dawn
    October 13, 2002
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    excellent

    I'm completely with Jen.. That's exactly my problem lately. 'To love ourselves, first... Before we can love, truly love, another...' I'm without words on this, VERY good write. ~Kelsey~ :)


  • December 5, 2001
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    too easy to miss ourselves going in different directions, we lose touch not just with each other but our own pyschosis.

    GOod write!


  • Bigmammajen
    December 4, 2001
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    To love ourselves, first…
    Before we can love, truly love, another…

    Theres my problem right there....
    Another beauty friend.

  • MistressofMayhem
    December 4, 2001
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    Very nice...

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 30, 2001
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    Man, I am in awe of your work of late, I wish mine were getting better!!

    Karen

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