Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Hearts

See me not for my surface
For that is all you ever did
And I'm tired of looking at lies

I've broken all my masks for you
But you still don't see my face
And you'll never wake up from your deceit

That is your own eyes
That is your own clouded mind
That is your cold and twisted heart

And yes my heart looks twisted too
As half of it has just returned
Then is given once again

Author notes


Written March 27th, 2006

In a list

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • March 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    That is so wow!short and to the point.Its really good.


  • LILbabyG
    March 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    The ending is good because it changes from the start but still relevant good job I like it, I can see what your talking about