Silent whispers within the night
Beckon to my lonely heart
With their darkened, eerie cry
Hiding in the shadows of life
Sweep away the cobwebs, leaving only
Ashen tears, and ruby lips pressed
Tightly together in greatest fear
Cut the thorned vines, forever
Wrapped around my heart
And set me free once again
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Written March 26th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
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300 points, ended March 27, 2006, 14 entries
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Thank you for the comments. Words from you are always so greatly apprecuated. I'm glad you enjoy what I write, it is nice to know someone get's something from it
Autumn -
Wonderful
and ruby lips pressed
Tightly together in greatest fear
There is always a ripple of sensuality in your work. It breathes and invites and I always walk away with this wonderful knowing smile. Please always write, your pages are my refuge from my stress. And I'm a full time Husband father student employee, I need a lot of refuge.
Smiles and laughs,
rick -
Thank you for your comments, they are most appreciated. You have a good idea of the thoughts that came out with this write. I would say pretty much nailed on the head.
Autumn -
I like the idea of rebirth....be it love....or life.....or just my imaginations.....when they resemble things past now present again.....we weave them into the brightest of moments relived and regained.....very nicely done....these thoughts presented are the toughts i gathered from you.....
Malabu -
This was a wonderful write!
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Beautifully done. I love the sense of resurrection this piece leaves you with. As though it is the moment freedome shall shine upon you. Excellent job here.
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