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can love truly win

transgressions of the heart
through emotions
are worlds apart
somewhat doomed
from the start
can something taht will always be
morph into what you think it should be
could life ever be that good
can it be true
can love really triumph over all
catch you when you fall
can you go back and forth
and love still win
can you dive in
then fall out of love
or is it like the sea with a tide
no matter what way it's tried
is it that perseverant
will it last or does it just haunt you like a ghost from the past
what if you dont want it
is it still tehre
hidden deep inside
until you again care
and bare you soul to another again
does love truly always win?

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Written March 26th, 2006

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