I heard the voice and looked into her brown eyes,
I heard her uncertainties and prayed she’d not cry,
I wanted to hold her tight, and make the feelings go,
The more time I spent the more feelings that did grow.
The hours quickly passed as our voices acted as comfort
We got along great just like the puppets Ernie and Bert
I wanted to draw a picture that showed my true feelings
And tell her how her happiness, lifted me to the ceilings.
A spark that possibly could’ve been great or maybe end in sorrow
But God gave us one life to spend, living like there’s no tomorrow
So I took a chance to really know someone special to me
And she was my first girlfriend and our fate ended blissfully.
I remember this time like a perfect dream
A time well spent, or so it did seem
Either way, I’ll end ahead in the air like a dove
To know I met one of Gods creations fallen from Heaven above.
Author notes
well i think my first g/f was like 5th grade, but this was rough b/c i kinda i've been in a block for sometime now :\ lol anyhoo, do enjoy Da-bo-rah!
Written March 26th, 2006
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Hey trev! That was a good poem....the bert and ernie part a little weird but good. Hey! I took a poetry class this quarter you should read some of my stuff, especially beat up shoes....its pretty good and im spose to send it in to a publisher....but anyways, check it out homie. Sorry I couldn't make it to your party I had to work congrats!
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This is a really good poem. You are very talented,and I loved it. Thank you for sharing a part of you
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Awwwww Trevor this is really cute....You haven't really written anything in a while, so I appreciate your entry....did you figure out the code? If you didn't. then you aren't eligible (I think I spelled that wrong) for a trophy.... I'm just letting you know, because then you'll have a chance, like everyone else. Again, thank you for entering. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
Anyways....Have a fantastic day, and good luck in all your business!!!
*Debbie*
~Future Country Sensation~
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