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Introduction to The Mystery of the Enchanted forest

This is a new fantasy story about a young woodland elf who sets out to solve the mysterious attacks that have been happening around the forest and on the border, where the mountains lie. The main character, Peetah, is a young woodland elf, a rare species of elf in the forest area as most of the woodland elves had died out. Peetah belongs to the smallest of the two woodland elf families in the forest, and attends a school full of mountain elves, which are much more common in this story.

Characters include:

Peetah - The young female woodland elf who just wants to get away from her family

Mika - An orphaned mountain elf who lives with the larger family of woodland elves, Slightly older than Peetah. Also a main character

Sammie - The angel who likes the company of male beings

Helena - An angel/demon cross who also likes thge comapny of male beings

Naushka - A vampire angel, daughter of Sammie, and has alot of contact with her, and the angels.

Kyura - Another vampire angel who sems to have more contact with the vampires, who live deep within the mountains caves.

Samira - Helena's daughter with an elven father. Samira's father was killed along with many of the other woodland elves. Samira has the looks of an angel, with the wings of a demon, but she has the rare blue hair of the elven gene pool.

And many more.

The story is set in a forest which is surrounded by mountains, in which many creatures live. The first chapter will be up soon. If you like the sound of the story from this introduction, then please read and comment.

Author notes

The introduction to a new fantasy story, involving a young female woodland elf, who is out to solve the mystery of why alot of the creatures seem to be getting killed during the day.
Written March 26th, 2006

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  • 1-Winged-Angel
    March 29, 2006
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    The first part has been posted on storywrite. I hope you enjoy the story as much as you enjoyed the introduction


  • Shadow Storm
    March 28, 2006
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    Great!

    I enjoyed this story introduction very much and I'm looking forward to reading more! You have created many interesting and likeable characters for this tale and it will be great to read about their lives. I have always loved Elves! And I find vampires, angels and demons fascinating. ~Charles~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 26, 2006
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    i will be counting the days until i get to see an orginal, this sounds like it is going to be awsome, keep it flowing