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Argue

Scrams and shouts
Are all I hear
They are coming closer
They are almost here
Curses echoing
Bouncing from the wall
Rising high
Before starting to fall

Why wont they stop?
Why cant they see?
Their continuing fighting
Rips through me



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Written March 26th, 2006

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  • Broken barbie
    April 12, 2006
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    Ther is an up and a down to this very sad and disturbing poem. The upside: You get a lot of wisdom from pain. The downside: You actually have to experiance it. Sorry that life sux but hey it's no picnic leading a perfect life either.

  • sneakers
    March 27, 2006
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    this is sad. hope things go better.
    sneakers

  • orical
    March 26, 2006
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    awwwww sweetie another great write. Well done xxx