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The Penguin who could'nt Swim


He slides so fast, on the frozen creek
He swirls and streaks on the ice so sleek.

His eyes spy some fish,
just under the ice,
He longs for a dish,
these fish would suffice...

He does it once, he does it twice,
He beaks his beak into the ice.

A crack appears, the ice breaks down,
the Penguin falls in, and then he drowns...! (OMG!!)





Author notes

To readers who think this poem is horrible: Well...it was all a mistake! It was 1:00 a.m., I was tired *Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaw-n* n suddenly the last word just came to me!
Fer those who still think its horrible I will re-write it some other time...shiver...
Written March 26th, 2006

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  • Loveless Ritsuka
    December 14, 2006

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    OMG!! YOU KILLED HIM!!!

    I love penguins and you killed him!!!!! !!! HOW COULD YOU??!!! Anyways. This poem is pretty good (cept for the penguin DYING!) But, yeah it's still cool cause it is about a penguin. and yeah sorry about it being all random and stuff (kinda tired this morning. makes me hyper). Yay for the penguin.

    • Reedurnuthinelz
      December 17, 2006
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      OMG I DID!!

      Hey, I like panguins too,...its just...I didnt feel creative enough at the moment...and dont worry hes a much happier panguin in Heaven!

      You like anime and vampires!? Hey, have you ever watched Blood the Last Vampire and the tv series Blood+? pretty good.


  • AmberMoon
    December 5, 2006

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    Yeah, it's sad... if you're all that into penguins. Or if you've ever met one. Heehee.. this reminds me of my Drunk On Water poem.. Same background too.

    • Reedurnuthinelz
      December 13, 2006
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      The rant of a converted-vegetarian

      Its nature, animals die!! IF you think its so cruel stop eating slaughtered living things for breakfast and wearing there skin!!

      • AmberMoon
        December 13, 2006
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        Alrighty, Mr. Converted-Vegetarian. (You should change your name to that). I think I'm this close '______' to becoming a vegetarian. Especially in the Summer. I hate cooked meals when it's hot. Maybe I just won't eat meat in the Summer. I should do that after I leave Mom's place, though. She won't even let me start. Ahahaha...

        • Reedurnuthinelz
          December 13, 2006
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          HAH!

          I just saw this Vegan site yesterday and its saying pigs r smarter then dogs and three-year olds. And talked about veal etc...which there was also a South Park about...wow South Park is sooo educational!!

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