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Sticky note

I am a sticky note
Stick me on your computer screen
so you can remember all your to-do's
Stick me on the fridge,
to remember your groceries.
Stick me to the door,
to tell someone where you hid the key.
And when all is done
pull me off and throw me away

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Written March 26th, 2006

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  • Sevati
    July 26, 2006
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    Your poem is so sweet and warm … it made me all fuzzy inside, it’s simply the most cutest thing I’ve read in a very long time … you’re very original and your poem has certainly lighted up my day (well it’s night right now, but you got the point )…
    Keep on writing poems just as cute as this one …

    Oh my gosh, if I say cute another time I think I’ll get diabetes … ups! Silly me, I just did … LOL …


  • Waiting 4 Evermore
    July 26, 2006
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    very interesting, its different and has a sort of air to it. short, sweet, yet when you think of it in a way it seems kind of sad. very snazzy i must say good job. especially love the last line.
    --haley


  • Summer Dawn
    July 26, 2006
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    the art of poetry... beautiful write


  • sarajaneUK
    July 26, 2006
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    a great little write...i heard, they invented the tacky glue first, didnt know what to do with it, and some smarty pants came up with post-its. gosh i wish it had been me! sj


  • Kal.
    July 26, 2006
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    Lol humorous poem, liked the end of it Too bad for the sticky note man.
    Great funny write,
    Cheers
    -Kal 24


  • Simply-Complex
    May 8, 2006
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    Hi. Haven't talked to you in monthsss. I like this one. It seems like a cutesy poem, but can have some deep meaning in it-if you choose totake it that way.
    I like it. [ :


  • simply-lovely
    May 4, 2006
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    this is a cute poem! it short and sweet and thats what i like about it. very good.
    Love lots,
    Kristine


  • darkwriter24
    May 4, 2006
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    Very original. Never would've thought of writing a poem about a sticky note Makes me sorta feel bad about all those sticky notes I've thrown away in the past - they've done so much for me.


  • LaKitKat
    April 4, 2006
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    This has to be the cutest poem about nothing that I have had the pleasure of reading.
    Kathy


  • Princess Ayeka
    March 29, 2006
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    Lol. I had a good laugh at this one. I love sticky notes, post its, whatever you want to call them. Tehy're cool, and I love the little colored ones. Someone commented that this could be interpreted as a poem about our throwaway culture, and I agree with that. Even if thats not as you intended it, it struck me as a satirical poem about America. Thinking too hard? Lol. Go sticky notes!
    Princess Ayeka


  • NoWayJo
    March 29, 2006
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    a metaphor of a poem certainly, but although you are trying to relate a deeper meaning than that of only a sticky-note, the inference is not as direct. Maybe to indulge as to the particular sticky-note reminders, such as "Make birthday dinner reservations for BLAH-BLAH," or "Pick up BLAH-BLAH'S shirts from the cleaners" or something to that effect can a direction correlation of the importance of the sticky-note reminder and the person of "importance" so easily cast aside in this poem be inferred.

    Of course, this suggestion is only made by my interpretation of the poem. If you merely intended it as a sticky-note themed poem, fine...but I can see it developed as a whole lot more.

    Jo


  • Perilin
    March 27, 2006
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    lol
    nothing to do but giggle and smile at the strange creativity you've shown here
    Edited on Mar 27, 11:21 because 'speltjekir broukin'.


  • Ally In Wonderland
    March 26, 2006
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    Stuck on you!

    LOL i love sicky-notes... they are great! i use them to study, to remember stuff and to write things on them when i'm lonely.... ok maybe not all of those things but some lol .... good poem, and funny topic! Can't wait to see more of your poems!


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 26, 2006
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    It's cute but also a little sad. The idea of having no purpose but to be of service to others. But I think I'm thinking to hard, lol.

    It's cute. Say hello to your mom for me.

  • W1ldCh1ld
    March 26, 2006
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    Well luckily I don't have job, so I can still invent something and say it is mine....Thanks for the comment, it is cool to know a bit more about sticky notes....


  • Magic Bullet
    March 26, 2006
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    If I was to llok at this a a post modern critic I may wax lyrical about how this is a bitter diatride against a throw away culture. I'm not so I'll just say something along the lines of 'awesome' and provide some historical background to the humble sticky note.

    I don't know what you do for a living but if you work for a big national or international company you may have seen something in your contract along the lines of any invention of yours becomes the intellectual property of the company you work for. This basically means that if you invent something revolutionary your company can make as much as possible off it and only have to pay you your standard salary. This happened to sticky note man. He came up with the idea to use in his office at work. The company he worked for saw how useful it was and patented the design as Post-it, made millions and kept the inventor in his normal job. Kind of sad really.

    Workers of the world rebel!!!

  • louloubelle
    March 26, 2006
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    Aw, cute! Sticky notes are great! And does make a change to read something a bit different too!

  • Merrigan
    March 26, 2006
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    hehehe, this is cute, well done 'sis!

  • Lacyte
    March 26, 2006
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    Hey, my little Sticky Note!!! This is very sweet and cute. A lovely change to all the serious stuff we find on the site. And no, I won't throw you away, I'll keep you forever. Love you, Sweet Child - you're the best!!!


  • LILbabyG
    March 26, 2006
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    Ha ha good nice to see something different, a poem really about nothing other then a sticky note very creative good work

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