I see you,
you gaze into my pools of green,
a moment dreamt of ecstasy,
you stand so ever close my dear,
as you calm my every fear,
peacefully
My darling,
this heart so meek is tainted some,
but darling dear, you are the one
your lips of tenderness kiss true,
I feel I can't stop loving you,
tenderly
My lady,
This love's for you, your love's for me
don't hurt my heart, it's yours to be,
joining heavenly, dreams dreamt of
both sacrificing hearts of love,
trustingly
Author notes
Collab with poeticweaver a.k.a Tim
He's so awsome and talented.
Pleasure working with him on this piece.
Much love Tim
P.s - No we're not really secret lovers. Just a piece.
Written March 26th, 2006
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Excellent write, I love the way this was versed!
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X cellente!!
Great write with the Timster...the mans got them MAD poetic skills.!!! You 2 collab well..I stopped by after seein urs featured... Kewl AP and collection of writing.. -
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when i read this it almost made my heart stop beating for a minute because it was so sweet.wonderful job to you both.
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What a sweet and wonderful poem this was. I love it. Beautiful work! Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful write. Much depth and love. Awsome!
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I Love it!
This does it for me!...its just so pure and sweet and lovely!...I love it! -
Lovely!
I just enjoyed penning with you,
thanks again, it looks great!
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awesome
oh wow beautiful. such lovely words .. very heartfelt. thank you for sharing your words with me. keep on writing.
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beautiful!!
to tori and tim...
absolutely beautiful and heart-warming. very professionally put together. powerful. loved how the first lines of each stanza made a line and statement in and of itself.
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Find love, hold on
wake with the dawn
clinging to covers warm
as both eyes swarm.
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wonderful collaboration
the simplicity of this poem makes it stand out. it's true and honest and comforting to read. very nicely done
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Awwwwww You Guys this is just beautiful, I love it, Your pens blend magically together Josephine.
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lovely
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Love is so nice when it is returned as strong as it is felt! This was nice to read! The Shaker
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wow wonderful write! The flow was wonderful.
This is beautiful, lovely.
very sincere and very well written
I love this poem. Great work, absolutely fabulous.
Loved the rhyme and the form too
thanks for the read and keep penning -
good
very sincere and very well written...there's some nice lines in here..nice and simple but very effective..well done,regards..
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DIVINE!
Such a masterpiece, for me, reads of such sweet love, and the form is unique, and the poem is tenderly sweet!
Great job you two, you should do more together!
Really elequent, and beautifully penned!
poetryrocksmysox
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Thanks!
Thanks PrabhuDayal Khattar, you like give the best comments, I appreciate your time reading us, and how lovely you enjoyed this. You take care our friend, read, and pen on!
-Timothy and this other chick, lol...
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Its a beautiful poem, great rhyming and emotion. Loved to read it.
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This is beautiful, lovely. Theres no other way to describe it. Very well written, flows well.
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I like this, its very good.
"joining heavenly, dreams dreamt of
both sacrificing hearts of love,"
These two lines are amazing!!!! well done, both of you.
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My lady,
This love's for you, your love's for me
don't hurt my heart, it's yours to be,
joining heavenly, dreams dreamt of
both sacrificing hearts of love,
trustingly
it is a great presentation of the heart to heart talk between two lovers ,although one is silent one, but the silence can also be heard here through and through.The thoughte are very heartfelt and very touchy to bring the depth of the sentiments of the love very nicely as well.The beauty of this write lies in its pace which is giving the flavour of the love to the readers too.The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too.I really appreciate this work .prabhu dayal khattar
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lol yes and will pen more when I'm not in a bad mood lol At least I kept up with everything that was going on tonight. But all in all thank you for having me in this piece and sharing your ieads and thoughts. U R D best. Mr.Awomse. Shall we do it again next time. Of course. I'd love to. Take care now.
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Nice Job My Friend!
Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time with me on this piece, I know I take forever, lol.. But not bad for our first collab together, not bad at all! We'll have to practice more, hint, hint, lol...But we'll pen maybe next time when I'm drinking coffee 
LOL! 
Much love my sweet friend!!!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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