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Out Of Sight, Out Of Mind (Triolet)



Far out of sight and out of mind
Are truths that help us not to fall;
The wicked man is walking blind.
Far out of sight and out of mind

The truth he will not seek to find-
His thoughts are not of God at all;
Far out of sight and out of mind
Are truths that help us not to fall.

~~~~~~~

Author notes

Psalm 10:4-5a~
(4)The wicked, through the pride of his countenance, will not seek after God:  God is not in all his thoughts.
(5a)His ways are always grievous; thy judgments are far above out of his sight:...


I read that last phrase from the verses above, and it made me think of a phrase I use often- "out of sight, out of mind."  I didn't realize God said it first!
Written March 25th, 2006

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  • heismysong
    March 26, 2006
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    Hey, Painpoet!

    I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciated your comment- thank you!

    I actually like the triolet form, but this particular one was a challenge to write- it was difficult to make the words say exactly what I wanted them to say.

    I do have other non-Bible-related triolets among my collection, if you're ever interested to browse for them- just so you know!

    Thank you again!
    Natalie

  • Painpoet
    March 26, 2006
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    Nicely done Heismysong though you know I am not a big fan of religios poetry this one is well written and a most difficult form to write in good job Poet


  • Molassis
    March 26, 2006
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    I ALWAYS know that I will enjoy reading your poetry... that's just a fact.

    This is lovely... your poetry always has something of God's truth sprinkled in... I just really love that!

    An excellent poem indeed! God bless you! ~Melissa