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All i want

All i want to be is dead, if life is all lies,pain and tears.Then there is no reason for me to live if takes 5 mins for happiness soon it disappears then only takes min for to be at its ends. So is life all lies is life all pain. If i cry every hour every min, then why bother why bother living if life is so full of misery. There is nothing to see nothing to live for cause everytime i see i  get blind by the tears, evertime i live for something that something fades.Weather its a good thing cause all good things always fade and the bad things always fade living with pain.I try to be things that i don't feel it to be real. So i grasp the knife squeezing it as i was squeezing the life i live and the life i will end. Don't remember me but remember the tears u made me cry,and remember the lies that ties you made my stomach feel.

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Written March 25th, 2006

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  • Reb153
    January 4, 2007

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    Life is something that does get hard. I know how your feeling. Its good that your expressing yourself in poetry it helps a lot. i love this one. keep on living and riding the waves of pain. you will find happiness. if you have myspace go to my page on the poetry site. I will be there for you.
    lots of love,
    becky


  • White Shadows
    July 18, 2006
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    deep. is all i can rly say...I can relate to u,in so many ways, things will get better in the end I have to agrre with both redheadedgurl and forever your angel. I am also here to talk if u need ok.


    Evee


  • redheadedgurl
    March 25, 2006
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    luv and hugs mariah

    this is so deep and full of so much hurt...the feeling to be made out as worthless...is not something happy or forfilling...i cant say that ending life itself is the answer but questions may not always hold the truth that you are wishing for so badly...love and trust are delicate things and part of you that you must give with caution...


  • Miss Bue Laces
    March 25, 2006
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    This is amazing, but don't give up on life so soon. There's bad bits and good bits, just wait for the good ones to come along. Then they all seem worth it.
    If you ever need to talk i'm always about, i know you don't know me but i know it helps to talk to people about it all, instead of bottling it up. That doesn't help at all.
    Keep your head up.

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    kisses_x
    Edited on May 12, 9:52 because ''.