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Happy Birthday, Blushfulmoon

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Happy Birthday, Blushfulmoon

For a dear friend and poetess

A flower bloomed one moonlit night
As the moon blushed overhead
It shone upon this miracle
Whose never ending love was spread

The years ahead brought forth delight
For all who looked upon this bloom
Her light shone brightly over all
Throughout the land, defying gloom

This flower came into our lives
To all within allpoetry
With rhyme and verse and stroke of pen
Words from her heart for all to see

So if you look within her heart
Or hear it beating softly here
You’ll know you’ve been blessed again
By Blushfulmoon, our friend so dear

So Happy Birthday, dear Susan
Whose muse inspires such sweet verse
May you have many more to come
Spreading joy through the universe


Dee Garner
© March 25, 2006

Author notes

Blushfulmoon's birthdayis today, March 25th.  She's been such a dear and loving friend to me and others on the site.  I hope my poem expresses at least some of how I feel about Susan and her loving thoughts and friendship.

Happy Birthday, Susan  
Love you  

You can check on Blushfulmoon for yourself at www.allpoetry.com/blushfulmoon
I think you'll be happy that you did
Written March 25th, 2006

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  • Rubee
    April 24, 2006
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    WOW...what a wonderful and glowing birthday tribute. I don't think there could be a better gift than that of a special poem to honor the person and the occasion.
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY Susan... belated, since I haven't been around for a while.
    Dee...I'm sure this touched her heart and soul. What a wonderful gift, so beautifully and tenderly written!!!


  • individuality gold member
    March 26, 2006
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    a beautiful birthday poem for blushfulmoon. i hope her day was full of smiles, i know she has had lots of health problems so deserves to find a smiling time


  • melphleg gold member
    March 25, 2006
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    Very nice and well written. I'm glad you made her day. You are correct, Susan has touched many lives.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 25, 2006
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    beautiful~

    Oh sis
    This is just beautiful..I didn't feel well today and was in bed most of the day..I loved this and it was so sweet of you to do this for me...I am bookmarking it...thanks for being such a wonderful friend to me and supporting me here over the years at Allpoetry your such a wonderful person.....
    Loved this
    Love you too
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Ellis gold member
    March 25, 2006
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    Very nice

    A lively tribute.


  • Perished Muse
    March 25, 2006
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    WOW, lovely imagery, i could feel your love, your care, in every word...
    i bet Susan is Honored to have a friend like you...

    I am new to Allpoetry, but reading a poem such as this gives me hope that i might be accepted within this community... I have always been a person scared to show others what goes on in this crazy head of mine... but just looking and reading everyone's poetry on this site, has been inspiration enough to start sharing...


  • Thorin-Ganush
    March 25, 2006
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    This is so sweet and graceful. Very elegantly written, with nice use of rhyme. I can feel the emotion in this piece. I especially liked when you said that the flower came to AllPoetry. Great job!

    -Thorin

  • mnc
    March 25, 2006
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    Wow, this is a great poem, it has great words usage, i can just picture this in my head. Nice poem!

  • noir eclairage
    March 25, 2006
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    Wow . . .
    This piece of art is astounding really! Susan should feel realllyyy special But honestly, the imagery was so great, the descriptions so vivid.... I formed a wonderful picture in my mind's eye. Your writing is really exquisite oh wow you have talent!
    I feel like an amateur lol.
    Keep writing.
    ~noir ~


  • angelgirl
    March 25, 2006
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    this is a great poam and tribute to a dear friend,although i havent had the plusure of knowing blushfulmoon im sending
    a wish her way to have a wonderful birthday.godd bless


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 25, 2006
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    Sentiments very well expressed in these lines - such wonderful and kind things you have said about this friend and fellow AP poet -

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    March 25, 2006
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    Sweet Susan

    the flowers bloom and Susan is blessed and is a blessing.I do not know her personally but this wonderful tribute speaks of one special lady.i loved reading this Poem.Friendship and kindness go much further than the best Poetry.lovely,my friend.Elizabeth.


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    March 25, 2006
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    aw really sweet. a really nice write. im sure she'll absolutely love it. well done hun
    jess

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