In the summertime;
and spring;
when the butterflies;
spread their wings;
and the Roses;
smell so sweet;
a sensation;
nothing can beat;
Butterflies and Roses;
in the summer and spring;
strolling into the sunset;
its the most beautiful thing;
picnics in the park;
light music floating by;
the BBQ aromas;
my oh my!
Butterflies and Roses;
in the summer and spring;
strolling into the sunset;
it's the most beautiful thing;
with the stars in the sky;
the day is coming to end;
just watching a summer's day go by;
oh, Rose's and Butterflies, oh;
Rose's and Butterflies.
Author notes
i love this!! i couldn't decided whether poem or lyrics. Think Corinne Bailey Rae 
. tell me what you honestly think
Written March 25th, 2006
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How sweet and nice!
Your words have advanced so much in the last year...I am quite excited to read more.
I really loved the way you integrated sensations into the piece...a nice touch!
Princess -
lol, thank-you for the comment
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i would definitely say lyrics. they are so sweet and adorable and cute and beautiful! they are really great, reminds me of a warm spring day, bbq on the lake. creates a very nice mental image....although i must admit i hate butterflies
they terrify me, lol.
Great job
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wow jax - tis brilliant! ur rele doin great! keep em up, luv ya lots, Kat.xxx.
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This is good... cutie... keep the good writes coming... I also like the background because it goes with the poem... Keep on reading and writing.... I hope that you read some of mine....
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Thanks i.m glad you liked them.
Jacqui
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Very good and quite adorable these lyrics are.
I haven't heard her music yet you did tell me she has that 'summery' voice and feel to her so this fits in perfectly, thus the song/poem being about summer time. Very good lyrics/poem. i love the title as well, makes everything about the summer seem so peaceful.
Well done
michael
xxxxxx
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