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Imbue Words

Written down to imbue upon the page
unceasingly voiced for a reverberations sermon
to which  is portrayed in the crease of the eye
as the pupil eclipses a stories magnetism
yet it's carried through spirit and pure assurance
who holds only conviction to root
until you find in the tribute of modesty
arid breaths reaching the lips
where ones heart subsides in turmoil of frost
which holds no more than the testament neglected
from which blends the colors of conclusion
for the hour is extinct
to leave the lovers bliss
for an eternal draft of fatalities kiss
to guide the means folded
in a breakup note

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Written March 25th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Fellow poet
    April 4, 2006
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    It cool, at least you got around to reading it.
    Thanks,
    Jon


  • Forever-Damned
    April 4, 2006
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    This is brilliant.. I am so sorry I didn't read yours. I made a mistake on my final note thing saying " I did" read them all. It mean to say I didn't. I didn't have enough time to considering school and work and other stuff. I am so sorry! I really am! I feel horrible. This really is a fantastic piece. And I really am sorry even if you don't believe it.