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The Red

Watch me
Slowly
Going down
Our lives are shattered on the ground

You hold me close
You touch my face
Makes me go under

Just keep my hands in yours
Let the shelter of our bodies be removed
Let us sin, just once again
And let us be content

You whisper in my ear,
Tales of a bygone time
You tell me it is no more
You tell me this is all that matters now

And then you strike me down
The red mark upon my eyes
You tell me you don't care
Your heart tells me that you're scared

It's true,
Your heart is young
You don't quite understand
My dear, just close your eyes
All you need is here

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Written March 25th, 2006

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  • EmsandAbs
    March 25, 2006
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    Abuse is never good no matter hwat (If it isn't about abuse i'm sorry) This was well written and thoguh provoking.
    -Pinky