Oh, a lovely gift from God,
Oh, a sweet creation the Lord.
How nice is a smile
it looks good on every one
whether that person is a grown up or a child.
My smile fights against my frown
making not even little sound.
When I smile I feel happy,
when I smile I look pretty.
My teeth stick out and soon my smile changes into laugh
and my mood is no more upset or rough.
But then I feel my mouth must have some rest
and on my face smile is best
Author notes
I want to tell you all smile and live happily
Written March 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Kids, you make us smile!!! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended August 8, 2006, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For the kids 13 and younger: Anything to cheer me! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is great. I wish the world would smile like this too! I love the way you described your smile, and that you have a true appreciation for the value of a happy face. Really nice poem. Thanks so much for entering!
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Thankyou...I am glad you liked it...
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Very nice Mekhala. Thanks ever so much for entering.
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Thanks
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Smile suits me as well... its a nice ode to smile... now onwards when ever I'll think of this poem my grin will touch my ears
I like this very much...
mina
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Pleasure's all mine, Mekhala. You deserve it.
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Thanks for such a nice comment.
Mekhala
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EXCELLENT
Awww Mekhala, this is so sweet. Thanks for sharing this great poem. Though I'm having a rather hard time right now, I shall remember to smile as much as I can. And if I forget, you'll be the first to know. lol. Great job, my friend. Brian
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